Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Unknown Significance

Pen to paper

Endless amount of words

Nothing useful

Nothing without a verb

I’ll do this I’ll do that

Nothing ever gets done

Everything just becomes

Words words words

Listen, Speak, Think

Nothing but words numbers

and words

Purpose imbedded in our soul

Survival of the Fittest

and not one for all and all for one

Brotherhoods, Friendships built on hierarchy

Bricked by the fact that nothings more important

Than what can be taken

But always forgotten is what has been

11 comments:

snowyarchangel said...

I really like this poem. Its very interesting.

Jasmine said...

I like the school idea in this piece. When pen goes to paper...nothing enters our mind.

MC said...

interesting poem with good topic

Ms.Madame Fantasmia said...

So simple yet so true ...

FluκεY т y я o said...

gosh how this touches my heart!

bton said...

HAMLET! ...words, words, words. but yup, interesting poem.

Moby Dick said...

yeah seriously, imagine if we were all mute and illiterate! i think people were happier in the Stone Age :)

fresh_man said...

homeboy your deep!

4235 said...

Awwww John this makes you sound so deep and emotional...you are emotional anyway..tsk tsk. Overall I like it..words words words..maybe you should do your homework and update your plain blog :) lazy butt.

cupids EYE said...

Good Job Buddy! Talks the whole truth

Monkey Lover!! said...

jOHN SInce this was the only writin of urs that i liked i am gonna comment on this one:P ....nice one i actually LIKED it....this proves u learn something in writers craft...except being a C*********:P hahaha u now wut i said ....sorry:P:p just kidding ...byeee